I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora an Jashan. I see that in Te Reo Māori you are learning different greetings. I like that you chose ways to say hello in the morning. It would be helpful for your audience if you explained what your learning task was about.
Bula Jashan, I like your anime DLO. It reminds me of the anime pictures because I know Goku. Mabye you could change the spelling of Maori and you could also write a post about it?
Hi jashan, I like how you madee like they are talking. Could you next time check you spelling on the title and your capatals on the title too. Next time can you writing a bit more about what you learned. Did you learn anything else?
Halo Jashan, I really like your Māori Greeting with One Punch Man and the other guy. Maybe add that line there at the top of the greeting like this "Māori" at the top of the A, I'll show you how to do it but maybe check your spelling for your title. How did you get those images?
Kia ora Jashan, I see that you are learning Maori, I like how they were greeting to each other in Mouri very cool Jashan maybe next time for your tittle add capital letter, Maybe you can do a very cool comic in Maori and talk about what you have learnt, and what the characters were.
Hello Jashan I do like the Anime People on it But Not big fan of Anime, I do see that your trying to teach Other people in the World Maori, Maybe next time Talk about the blog post and make it in to a Story to make it Fun Instead of having a Photo of two Anime People and Having Two Maori Words Maybe Make a Video of you Teaching us how to say it. - Orlando -
Kia Ora Jashan! I love the anime people there super cool It is cool that you are learning new things about Te Reo Māori! I think maybe next time you could put some more info about Te Reo Māori that would make this a very quality blog post! Keep up your amazing work Jashan! :) - Aimee
Kia ora an Jashan.
ReplyDeleteI see that in Te Reo Māori you are learning different greetings. I like that you chose ways to say hello in the morning.
It would be helpful for your audience if you explained what your learning task was about.
Also, just check and change the spelling of your title to Te Reo Māori.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Jashandeep, I like the way you got the characters of google. I agree with Miss Waho change the spelling. What are the characters name's?
ReplyDeleteBula Jashan, I like your anime DLO. It reminds me of the anime pictures because I know Goku. Mabye you could change the spelling of Maori and you could also write a post about it?
ReplyDeletethat is so cool
ReplyDeleteyou are so go at posting blog
ReplyDeleteHi jashan,
ReplyDeleteI like how you madee like they are talking. Could you next time check you spelling on the title and your capatals on the title too.
Next time can you writing a bit more about what you learned. Did you learn anything else?
Halo Jashan,
ReplyDeleteI really like your Māori Greeting with One Punch Man and the other guy. Maybe add that line there at the top of the greeting like this "Māori" at the top of the A, I'll show you how to do it but maybe check your spelling for your title. How did you get those images?
Hi Jashan
ReplyDeleteI like the pictures you put on.Maybe you could check your spelling next time.Can you add more writing?
Kia ora Jashan,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put anime people on. I think you should change the word mouri to maori. How did you feel after you did this
i like what you did dat can you make a title
ReplyDeleteHi Jashan I really like the saitama part of things. Maybe try to label the characters and how did you get the goku thing? I never found it.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Jashan,
ReplyDeleteI see that you are learning Maori, I like how they were greeting to each other in Mouri very cool Jashan maybe next time for your tittle add capital letter, Maybe you can do a very cool comic in Maori and talk about what you have learnt, and what the characters were.
Hello Jashan I do like the Anime People on it But Not big fan of Anime, I do see that your trying to teach Other people in the World Maori, Maybe next time Talk about the blog post and make it in to a Story to make it Fun Instead of having a Photo of two Anime People and Having Two Maori Words Maybe Make a Video of you Teaching us how to say it. - Orlando -
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Jashan!
ReplyDeleteI love the anime people there super cool
It is cool that you are learning new things about Te Reo Māori!
I think maybe next time you could put some more info about Te Reo Māori that would make this a very quality blog post!
Keep up your amazing work Jashan! :) - Aimee